Wednesday, August 22, 2007

Thursday Thirteen #3

Thirteen Thirteen things I love to hear my husband say:


1. “Honey, I got a bonus on my paycheck, why don’t you go shopping without the kids and get yourself something special.”

2. “I’ll do the dishes tonight, sweetie, you’ve had a hard day.”

3. “Go look in the driveway, honey, I bought you a new car.” (This one actually happened a couple of weeks ago and I almost fainted.)

4. “I arranged a sitter, we’re going out tonight.”

5. “I arranged for the kids to go to my mom’s house, we’re staying in tonight.”

6. “Have I told you lately how beautiful you are?”

7. “No, those pants make your butt look wonderful.”

8. “You couldn’t look fat if you tried.”

9.“Our kids are only as brilliant as they are because they take after you.”

10. “I washed all the laundry today and mopped the kitchen, cleaned all three bathrooms and scheduled a full hour of massage…they’re waiting for you now, I’ll watch the kids.”

11. “You look as young now as you did when we got married 15 years ago.”

12. “Honey, can I do anything to help you?”

And my favorite- I know I’m a sap-

13.“Honey, I’m home.”


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Sunday, August 12, 2007

Vacation...finally!

I'm down in Southern Oregon at my parents' house on vacation for ten glorious days. The weather is beautiful and I don't have to do anything if I don't want to so I'll be spending my time reading, writing, and relaxing. Today we visited Crater Lake- oh my goodness it was so beautiful. We had a wonderful time and I'm ashamed that it's taken me so long to go back there- it's been at least twenty years. The weather was perfect for it and the kids had a great time.

Tomorrow I'm going to get some school shopping done for the kids because I don't have to pay sales tax here and I figure it's probably a good idea to get it done and save some $$ in the process. After that, I'll go visit my wonderful Grandmother. She's 82 and such a doll. I love to listen to her tell stories about her life when she was younger- partly because I get some great ideas for stories from it and partly because it's my history; it's where I came from.

Tuesday I'm meeting one of my best friends from high school for dinner. I miss her so much and I'm thrilled that I'll get to see her while I'm here.

Wednesday I'm going to the Josephine County Fair with my mom- that's our tradition for the past several years. We go to the fair, just the two of us and see one of the music shows that's playing as well as mosey around the exhibits. This year we're seeing the Charlie Daniel's Band and I can't wait.

Nothing planned for Thursday and Friday but Saturday, Sunday & Monday I'll be camping with my sister and her family at a great state park in Northern California. I haven't been camping in years so it should be a great deal of fun.

Tuesday the 21st I'll be heading home and Wednesday is my 15th Wedding anniversary so I'm hoping to do something special with hubby...My Prince Charming, My Knight In Shining Armour.

Anyway, I just wanted to let all of you, my loyal blog readers, what I'm up to this week. I hope you're all having some summer fun...or winter fun as my friends in Australia are having.

I'll write again when I get home and don't forget to visit the new blog that my critique buddies and I are co-authoring: www.princessesofthepen.blogspot.com

Thursday, August 09, 2007

Thursday Thirteen



Thirteen Memorable Things About the State's I've been to:



1. California- The Redwood Forest. My family used to camp at Jedediah Smith State Park every Labor Day Weekend.

2. Arizona- Scorpions, I visited my Aunt in Sedona and stepped outside her back door to watch the scorpions scatter

3. Nevada- Circus Circus- I loved watching the motorcycle riders in the big steel ball hanging from the ceiling.

4. Oregon- I was born there but I don’t remember that. I do, however, remember taking the jet boat rides down the Rogue River into Hells Gate Canyon. So much fun.

5. Washington- I live here now and love going to Seattle Center to see the Space Needle. Eating at the restaurant at the top is a fun experience.

6. Idaho- Couer D’Alene is such a fun quaint little town.

7. Montana- The sky that seems to never end. It’s so vast and uninterrupted. Guess that’s why they call it Big sky country.

8. Wyoming- Herds of Buffalo. They are such huge, amazing, curious animals

9. South Dakota- 1880 Town, Wall Drug, & Camping in The Badlands- I couldn’t pick just one thing for this state. We had a lot of fun here.

10. Wisconsin- Huge Dairy Farms. I’ve never seen so many cows in one place before.

11. Iowa- Corn fields that went on as far as the eye can see

12. Missouri- The Missouri River was so big.

13. Kentucky- That was our destination on our trip five years ago. We ended up in Barlow where I saw Fire Flies, Cardinals, Prairie dogs, & White tail deer. I toured soybean farms, tobacco plantations & an amazing quilt museum. Civil war battlegrounds, Mammoth caves. There is so much to love about that area of the country. I can’t wait to go back!

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    Sunday, August 05, 2007

    Princesses Of The Pen



    Come visit the newest blog on the block! Princesses of the Pen featuring the five princesses, Stacy Dawn, Bronwyn Storm, Johanna Riley, Jane Keegan, and myself, Marie Peck. Our Tiara’s are a little crooked…as is our views on writing, love, and life. Join a royally wild group of authors on our quests through the publishing world.

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    Ingredients of a successful Romance

    I picked up and dusted off a how to write book off my book shelf yesterday and came across a list of eleven 'ingredients' of a successful romance. The book is called: Writing Romance by Vanessa Grant. Click on the title of this blog post to go to her website.

    1. A Story Question: A good novel begins by stirring a question in the readers mind. The nature of your story question is determined by the type of novel you're writing. The story question must remain the focus throughout the story and should never be comletely answered until the end of the story.

    2. An Empowering Story: The best love stories are fantasies in which the deep emotional values of love, family, and partnership in marriage emerge victorious over lesser values.

    3. Sympathetic Heroine: The reader wants to identify with the heroine, care about her, and believe in her. She needs fears, dreams, hopes, a personal history, and hang-ups. She should begin the story at a change or crisis point in her life.

    4. A Hero She Can Love: Your hero must be a man your heroine can love. He should also have strengths, weaknesses, goals and dreams and he should also begin the story at a change or crisis point in his life.

    5. An Interesting Initial Conflict Or Problem: Most good books begin with an immediate initial problem or conflict which keeps the reader turning pages until the core conflict develops.

    6. An Emotionally Intense Core Conflict: As your hero and heroine come to know eachother, new obstacles to their happy ending must appear, or the original conflict must grow and change.

    7. A Plot: To be interesting, the events in your romance novel must be important to your characters. In a successful romance novel, the story or plot develops logically and naturally from character and conflict.

    8. Appropriate Sensuality: In a successful romance novel, the degree of sexual intimacy must be appropirate to the characters and the story. A love scene should reveal hero and heroine's feelings and excitement of their growing intimacy.

    9. Archetypes: Throughout time, certain character types appear again and again in our myths and stories, based on pattern or archetypes.

    10. Black Moment And Satisfying Resolution: As you read a good novel, the obstacles to happiness and fulfillment intensify as the story progresses. As you near the end of the book, you read a point where it seems impossible for hero and heroine to resolve their differences. This is the black moment.
    The more emotionally intense a black moment is, the more satisfying the reader will find the resolution and victory that follows.

    11. An Emotionally Satisfying Ending: When readers pick up a catagory romance they expect a happy ending. The ending must be emotionally satisfying, affirming the values of love and positive relationships.


    So, as I read through this list of must haves, I started thinking about my current WIP and trying to figure out if I had all of these things. I have some of them but I don't think I have them all. I started asking myself questions about my hero & heroine's conflicts, trying to decide if they were strong enough to carry the story and if they will weave together seamlessly to form a solid storyline. I think it certainly needs work but in thinking these things through, more ideas have come to me, ideas that will make the story stronger and won't be all that difficult to add in.

    It's amazing the things one can learn when you fall back on an old reliable source of information...How To Books!

    Thursday, August 02, 2007

    Thursday Thirteen


    Thirteen Things about The End of Summer


    1. Back To School shopping- I love going back to school shopping for my kids. New clothes and the smell of new crayons and pencils.

    2. The last camping trip- We always go on one final camping trip right before school starts. Kind of our last hoorah

    3. Getting tons of mail from the schools wanting me to update the kids' information- Hey I did't say it was 13 All GOOD things about the end of summer.

    4. Harvesting the vegetable garden- fresh zucchini, tomatoes, green beans, etc. Yummy.

    5. Anticipating quiet days while the kids are in school- I sure miss my uninterrupted writing time.

    6. Trees start changing colors- It's so pretty here when the leaves start to change. It's not quite happening here yet but it won't be long.

    7. Cooler nights- makes it easier to sleep when it's not 85 degrees at ten o'clock pm

    8. Birthday Season starts- We have birthday season here in our home because we have four birthdays in six weeks time. By the time it's over I'm worn out.

    9. Hubby doesn't have to work so hard- He's an RV tech so the end of summer brings a sigh of relief for him. He's much less uptight in the fall and winter.

    10. My muse opens up a bit- I don't seem to be able to muster as much creativity when it's so warm.

    11. Fair- The county fair and all the fun that brings

    12. Less ferry traffic- I live on a small island in the Puget Sound and during the summer the ferry traffic is horrible with all the tourists. When the kids go back to school, the tourists taper off and it's pleasant to drive through town again.

    13. Fewer bugs- 'nuff said.

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    Tuesday, July 31, 2007

    Okay, POV's are so....

    Okay, I guess I have very specific ideas about points of view and changing point of view in something that I'm reading. I mean, in my opinion- and that's all it is, my opinion- it should be easy to tell whose head I'm supposed to be in when I'm reading a story. Is it the hero or the heroine who is trying to decide what to do? Is it the hero or the heroine who is looking at a happy family with bittersweet longing? When an author isn't clear about whose POV is in the forefront, it's very confusing to the reader- to me anyway. I'm currently reading a book- the only specific info I'll give is that it's a Harlequin SuperRomance- and the author of this book head hops. The beginning of the chapter starts out in the heroine's POV and three paragraphs later- without any kind of definable break- we're in the hero's head.

    So tell me, when reading a book, do you like head hopping or do you like to stay in one POV for a time so you can get to better know the character?
    Do you like it when the POV change is obvious or not so obvious or completely hidden? Does it bother you when you're reading along and all of a sudden realize you are no longer in the POV you thought you were and you have to go back and figure out where it changed?

    Wednesday, June 13, 2007

    Daily Prompt # 5

    I haven't posted one of these in awhile so here you go:

    Setting: In a sushi bar

    First sentence: The first time I heard mention of...

    Four words that must be used in your story:
    Toe nails
    Velvet
    Gullible
    Podunk

    Write one paragraph or five. Post 'em here so I can read what you've come up with.

    Sunday, June 03, 2007

    Summer's Here!!

    Yes indeed, the sun is shining and it's a blissful 87 degrees outside. The children and I are going to the lake in just a little bit and I'll sit in the shade and read while the children splash around in the water. Fortunately the lake is only a few yards from my house so the walk is short.

    Then tomorrow its back to school for the munchkins and back to writing for me. I haven't written anything in a few days so it's time to get back to work. I'm working on a book that takes place in the town where I grew up. There are joys and challenges that go along with this work because I keep picturing the small town of my youth and in reality, that 'small' town no longer exists. But on the joyful side, many of the places I hung out in are still around so my characters will get to enjoy some of those same places as well.

    Have any of you written anything that takes place in the town where you grew up? What have been some of the biggest joys and challenges you faced in doing so?

    Tuesday, May 29, 2007

    Head over heels.....and not in love

    Yesterday my daughter had a birthday party to attend so I delivered her to the bowling alley right on time. I was 'ordered' to return for her by 3:45 so I went home and got a few things done around the house until it was time to go. A few minutes before 3:45 my husband asked if he could accompany me and we could go in his Jeep. "Sure." I said, glad for the chance to be a passenger and have the wind blowing through my hair on such a beautiful day.

    So, I climb up into the Jeep- this monster vehicle that requires a step for me to get into- and ride happily to the bowling alley, warmed by the sun, cooled by the breeze and enjoying my dear husband's company for a few minutes without kids.

    We pull into the parking lot and hubby asks, "Do you want me to go in and get her?"

    "Nah, I'll do it." I say, thinking that it'll be nice to see a few of my 'mom' friends for a minute while Cera gathers up her things. I throw one leg over the side of the Jeep and leap to the ground like I always do...but this time the unthinkable happens.

    My shoe got caught on the door frame as I hurtled toward the ground and I was unable to stop myself from crashing to the pavement. I caught myself with my already troublesome left arm and felt something give way in my shoulder. I'm now scraped up and scabbed on the palms of both hands and up my left arm. My left thigh is quite bruised and I have to see a doctor this afternoon about my shoulder because I can no longer move my left arm away from my body without crying.

    I can only imagine what I must have looked like falling from that Jeep. Had someone been video taping it, I might have won the grand prize on America's Funniest Home Videos.

    The lesson in all of this...When your better half offers to climb down from Mount Everest to pick up the children from a party, let him do it!